Sunday, 5 August 2012

haiku poetry

What are some really cool words and phrases we can use to write a haiku about wilbur?
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22 comments:

  1. Unknown5 August 2012 at 00:36

    Wilbur
    A very nice runt
    Shame if the farmer kills him
    Cute snout, curly tail!
    by ms mo

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  2. Unknown5 August 2012 at 18:40

    i really like your poem. Could we add something about nature? Ms. leanne

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  3. Unknown5 August 2012 at 18:41

    i like your thinking. by edwin

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  4. Unknown5 August 2012 at 18:42

    its a beautiful poem. by shreya

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  5. Unknown5 August 2012 at 18:44

    i think we need to write more haiku poems. use the word adventurous. by cameron

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  6. Unknown5 August 2012 at 18:45

    How about rolling in the mud? by Ezran

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  7. Unknown5 August 2012 at 18:46

    You should put a little more details about wilbur - like Wilbur was taken away from Fern. by Nicole

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  8. Unknown5 August 2012 at 23:48

    Here is Lyane's Haiku poem about Wilbur

    Good morning Wilbur
    Can you smell the farm fresh air
    Wow it is Autumn
    By Lyane 3L

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  9. Unknown5 August 2012 at 23:54

    Here is Justin's Haiku poem about Wilbur

    Wilbur is a runt
    The adventurous great pig
    always feels lonely
    By Justin 3L

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  10. Unknown6 August 2012 at 04:02

    it is great to see you take on Cameron's suggestion to use the word "adventurous Justin! And i think Lyane's poem really sticks to the true essence of haiku by reflecting on the seasons through our senses!
    What a fantastic job! Keep going, young poets!

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  11. Unknown6 August 2012 at 04:02

    oops......so sorry! Forgot to put my name after that last comment. Ms. Mo

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  12. Ms. Mo and Ms. Leanne9 August 2012 at 00:23

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  13. Unknown13 August 2012 at 00:13

    Wilbur
    Wilbur the pink pig
    Feel the softness of his skin
    Chubby and hairy
    by Cameron

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  14. Unknown13 August 2012 at 06:58

    Wilbur is chubby
    He is pink and very fat
    He is very cute
    By Angelina 3M

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  15. Unknown13 August 2012 at 07:06

    Oh Wilbur wilbur
    Don't you know that pigs can't fly
    Webs are for spiders
    By Dad's idea and Angelina's typings!

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  16. Unknown16 August 2012 at 17:36

    i wish i was tall by kyeong hui's mother

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  17. Unknown16 August 2012 at 17:41

    i wish i could sleep just for one day with out working by kyeong hui's dad

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  18. ilona18 August 2012 at 03:33

    Charlotte

    A really fine web
    A very clever spider
    Good friends with Wilbur
    by Reuben 3L

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  19. Unknown28 August 2012 at 04:27

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  20. Unknown28 August 2012 at 04:29

    I wish i was as smart as charlotte because maybe it is true that humans are not as smart as bugs.
    Lyane3L

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  21. Unknown28 August 2012 at 04:41

    charlotte is a good wiever
    because she can make her own web
    "she is a spider"

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  22. Unknown28 August 2012 at 04:42

    sorry i forgot to put my name and class
    Lyane3L

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